Portraite practice challenge 2/75

Mine ref Process

Had a little more energy for this one, and I think it shows. I feel like I over drew some parts. But the proportions are better(though something is off about the jaw) I think I captured the expression pretty well and also gotta say, teeth are weird man.

I'm also struggling with using the Loomis method cause other then the brow line i'm finding it requires to many judgement calls that I'm not very good at making. I instead focused on looking at angles and how the intersected and such which I found a lot more helpful.